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i think this should count as points for becca because i posted on his wiki paper even tho he didn't get it on til really late!!!

by Rebecca AndersonRebecca Anderson, 28 Apr 2008 18:23
jmag07jmag07 28 Apr 2008 14:22
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Good paper Nick! You had a strong thesis and good support for it. Nice job on your presentation too.

by jmag07jmag07, 28 Apr 2008 14:22
jmag07jmag07 28 Apr 2008 14:19
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I agree with Brittany, some of your thoughts didn't flow together very well. I did go through an make some corrections on you paper. Good job on your presentation.

by jmag07jmag07, 28 Apr 2008 14:19
Jessica RixJessica Rix 28 Apr 2008 06:57
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great job on your paper and presentation nick!!
I would just recommend reading through your paper, because some of the sentences don't make sense with certain words that you used. Very interesting topic!

by Jessica RixJessica Rix, 28 Apr 2008 06:57

hey nick!
the paper looks really good. your topic has a lot of scientific words which could be confusing but i thought you did a good job of explaining everything. i really can't say anything to bad…. look at your transitions and topic sentences to see where you can strengthen them but really overall good paper!

by Rebecca AndersonRebecca Anderson, 27 Apr 2008 15:33
Trisha915Trisha915 27 Apr 2008 06:23
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I liked your paper. Your topic was very interesting. I actually never thought about the ownership of genes before. You have a lot of good information. You did a great job.

by Trisha915Trisha915, 27 Apr 2008 06:23

You did a great job on both your paper and your presentation. I really liked your topic and your information was very interesting. I didn't know that those disorders even existed. You did awesome!

by Trisha915Trisha915, 27 Apr 2008 05:44
Trisha915Trisha915 27 Apr 2008 05:39
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Nathan's Final Paper

I liked your topic. I didn't know video games could be so beneficial. Your paper was good. Your intro could use some work though. You also did a good job on your presentation. Great Job.

by Trisha915Trisha915, 27 Apr 2008 05:39
Trisha915Trisha915 27 Apr 2008 05:30
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Leigh's Final Paper

You did a great job on your paper. I liked your introduction and conclusion. You also did a wonderful job on your presentation. Your topic was very interesting and I enjoyed it. Good Job.

by Trisha915Trisha915, 27 Apr 2008 05:30

I thought that your paper and presentation were both great. Working as a CNA it was interesting to know more about TB. You had good information and you presented it well. Great Job!

by Trisha915Trisha915, 27 Apr 2008 05:27
Trisha915Trisha915 27 Apr 2008 05:15
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Your paper is great. I really enjoyed your presentation too. I didn't know that adult stem cells were so useful and so much better than embryonic stem cells. Your topic was very interesting and you had a lot of great information. You did a wonderful job.

by Trisha915Trisha915, 27 Apr 2008 05:15

Brittany you have a great paper and you had an even better presentation! LOVED IT! I really like your topic and you have a lot of great information. Awesome Job!

by Trisha915Trisha915, 27 Apr 2008 05:05

I loved your topic! It was very interesting. Your paper and presentation were both amazing. The intro could pop a little more, but you have a lot of great information on the subject. Great Job!

by Trisha915Trisha915, 27 Apr 2008 04:56
Trisha915Trisha915 27 Apr 2008 04:49
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Angie's Final Paper

You had a great presentation. You had a lot of good points and good information to back up those points. I really liked your topic. It was very interesting. I understand that this is a first draft. You have very good information, but I think it just needs some organization. Great job on your presentation.

by Trisha915Trisha915, 27 Apr 2008 04:49
stang6411stang6411 26 Apr 2008 18:11
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Trisha's Final Paper

I really liked your presentation. I have to admit at some points I found myself staring with my mouth gaped open. I had no idea about the cruel ways that they actually perform the abortions. Your intro really pulled me in. You had a very controversial topic yet I think you did a great job and really explained abortion well.

by stang6411stang6411, 26 Apr 2008 18:11

I'm really glad you chose this topic to write about. I think cosmetic surgery becoming an increasing problem in our world. Your paper was filled with so much information i had no idea about. Your paper is really strong.

by stang6411stang6411, 26 Apr 2008 18:06
stang6411stang6411 26 Apr 2008 18:00
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Nathan's Final Paper

I really like your paper it's a good change up from everything else. I'm pretty on board with everyone else. You need to get a clearly defined thesis statement, and use some of your facts in your intro to really come out strong

by stang6411stang6411, 26 Apr 2008 18:00

I really liked reading through your paper, it has a lot of great information. I don't really have any tips other than whats already been said.

by stang6411stang6411, 26 Apr 2008 17:48
stang6411stang6411 26 Apr 2008 17:43
in discussion Hidden / Per page discussions » Angie's Final Paper

I also think you did a great job with your presentation. Your paper has some really great ideas. I really only had one big problem when I was reading your paper. I didn't know what efficacy or hypertrophy was, so maybe before or after just give a brief explanation of what some of the more uncommon words mean.

by stang6411stang6411, 26 Apr 2008 17:43

hey nate. i was a little confused in your introduction. i did not find what i believe to be a thesis. but dont worry you are not the only one who had a problem with there intro and thesis. just some tweaking here and there to make your intro stronger and i think you have it!

by Brittany FrischBrittany Frisch, 26 Apr 2008 06:39
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